Sage Cohen Offers Tips for the Productive Writer

Today’s guest post is from Sage Cohen, whose book, The Productive Writer, offers advice for writers of all types to help them get more out of their  writing. Here, Cohen shares one of her tips from the book.

The Productive Writer imagePractice Deliberately (And Hit Your Target)

A guest post by author Sage Cohen

“The best people in any field are those who devote the most hours to what the researchers call ‘deliberate practice.’ It’s activity that’s explicitly intended to improve performance, that reaches for objectives just beyond one’s level of competence, provides feedback on results and involves high levels of repetition.

For example: Simply hitting a bucket of balls is not deliberate practice, which is why most golfers don’t get better. Hitting an eight-iron three hundred times with a goal of leaving the ball within 20 feet of the pin 80 percent of the time, continually observing results and making appropriate adjustments, and doing that for hours every day—that’s deliberate practice.”—Geoffrey Colvin, senior editor-at-large, Fortune Magazine

Have you ever gotten halfway through a piece of writing and found yourself floundering about what you were actually trying to accomplish in the first place? This is where the concept of deliberate practice comes in. When you set your sights on specific goals for a piece of writing, then you’ll know exactly how close you come to achieving your goal.

Try writing out as many of these details at the top of your piece, or on a Post-It note that you attach to your computer screen or your working file folder. For example, I wrote this at the top of a recent piece I’d been contracted to write:

  • Target word count: 1,500
  • To appear in: Poet’s Market 2012
  • Audience: Aspiring poets with varying levels of publishing experience
  • Topic: Why Poets Need Platforms and How to Create One

I challenge you to name and claim the key objectives of every piece of writing, even a blog post, short story, essay, or poem, regardless of whether you’ve been hired to write it or if you ever intend to share it. Here are a few tips to get you started:

1. Choose a listener

When you know the audience you are writing for, you can start to imagine their needs, questions, objections, and level of interest. The simplest way to define this audience is by choosing a single person who is representative of this group, and write it “for them.” Maybe this person can even be available to read and give feedback about your work, to help you learn if it was received as you intended.

2. Name the objective of what you are writing

If you are writing on assignment or for a client, this is where you’d articulate exactly what goals you’ve been hired to accomplish. If you are writing something for a themed contest or publication, define the topic or parameters within which you must perform. And if you are writing creative nonfiction, poetry, or fiction that is not driven by particular submission requirements, try setting your own standard for what you expect this piece to do/be/accomplish and then observe if this makes a difference in your writing and revising experience.

3. Write! You know everything you need to know about this, already! [This is the sound of me shaking my pom-poms.]

4. Revise!

Anyone who’s ever spent years revising a single piece of writing knows all too well what hitting an eight-iron three hundred times might be like. Now, get out there and start swinging.

5. Evaluate whether you have achieved your objective

When your piece feels finished, revisit the goals articulated in numbers one and two, and see how your writing measures up. If there are discrepancies, return to number four, and then repeat. If you didn’t hit the mark the first time, don’t worry. Remember, this is all practice. And the only way we improve is through repetition. Practice shapes us, so we can most effectively give shape to our writing.

[Excerpted from The Productive Writer by Sage Cohen]

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About Sage Cohen

Sage Cohen is the author of The Productive Writer (just released from Writer’s Digest Books); Writing the Life Poetic and the poetry collection Like the Heart, the World. She blogs about all that is possible in the writing life at pathofpossibility.com, where you can: Download a FREE “Productivity Power Tools” workbook companion to The Productive Writer. Get the FREE, 10-week email series, “10 Ways to Boost Writing Productivity” when you sign up to receive email updates. Sign up for the FREE, Writing the Life Poetic e-zine. Plus, check out the events page for the latest free teleclasses, scholarships and more.

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Book Review: Cleopatra Rules by Vicky Shecter

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Cleopatra Rules! The Amazing Life of the Original Teen Queen by Vicky Alvear Shecter is sure to be a hit with anyone who is interested in learning more about the real story of Cleopatra, her life, and the times she lived in. This nonfiction book combines modern references with ancient facts while questioning the motives of the Roman historians who wrote much of what has come down through history of this most famous Queen of Egypt..

The book starts by asking readers three questions: Was the last queen of Egypt an evil, gorgeous woman dripping with jewels? A power-hungry temptress trying to rule the world? A pharaoh with a small snake problem? How about none of the above?

From there it goes into each phase of Cleopatra’s life, beginning when she was a child and going through her life with Julius Caesar and Marc Antony until her death. Each chapter is full of interesting facts that are illustrated with photos of ancient artwork, maps, drawings and more. The chapters are short and read quickly, but they are chock-full of information.

The tone is fun and irreverent throughout, but there’s no doubt the facts are accurate. To back up her text, Shecter has extensive endnotes on each chapter, a timeline of events, a glossary, and a bibliography of sources. Cleopatra Rules! should be a great way to bring history to life for middle-grade readers.

Book Review: Dogsled Dreams by Terry Lynn Johnson

Dogsled Dreams imageRebecca loves nothing more than to be out on the trail with her huskies on a sled. She dreams of leading a team in a race one day, and when her change comes, she really wants to prove to her dad that even though she’s only twelve, she can do it.

Dogsled Dreams by Terry Lynn Johnson is a fascinating look at the life of a musher. Rebecca puts in a lot of time with her dogs, feeding them, cleaning up after them and making sure they’re safe for the night. She also has to learn about dangers on the trail, like running in extreme cold and white-out conditions, and encountering wild animals on the trail. She knows that her dogs have to trust her, and she has to trust them, if they want to stay safe on a run.

Dogsled Dreams is a great book for mother-daughter book clubs with girls aged 9 to 12. Becca is confident, and she’s also willing to put in a lot of work to get what she wants. The dogsledding details are interesting, and they carry the story along without bogging it down. Moms and daughters can also talk about taking on responsibility and setting goals to work towards a dream.

The author has a great teacher’s guide that can be downloaded from her website. The guide can help book club members generate discussion questions. You’ll also a find a few fun facts about dogsledding, more information about the author and lots of other interesting tidbits when you visit: terrylynnjohnson.com.

Book Review: Far Above Rubies by Cynthia Polansky

Far Above Rubies imageWhen Sofie Mecklenberg married Jan Rijnfeld in Amsterdam in 1937 she knew she was becoming stepmother to six daughters. The oldest was 21 and about to be married herself, the youngest was 11. Sophie knew she would have to work hard to be their friend and a stand-in for their mother who had died five years before. She didn’t know her commitment would take her to a Nazi work camp and then Auschwitz.

Far Above Rubies by Cynthia Polansky is historical fiction that is based on the true story of a woman who volunteered to accompany her six stepdaughters when they were called out of Amsterdam and sent to a work camp. Vowing to her husband she would do all she could to keep them safe, she packed her suitcase and headed to the train station with them. She had no way of knowing what awaited them once they left home.

Sofie’s unfailing strength of spirit kept her going until the Russians liberated Auschwitz and during the hardships after the war. While Sofie’s circumstances are true, the story has been fictionalized to allow us a glimpse of what every one of the real people may have been thinking as the story unfolds.

The result is a cross between documentary and fiction that helps the reader get through the worst passages about Nazi atrocities. The title is based on a quote from proverbs: “A woman of valor who can find? For her price is far above rubies.” Polansky has insured that Sofie’s story of sacrifice and selflessness in the face of inhuman acts will not be forgotten. Mother-daughter book clubs with girls aged 15 and up will be able to explore how Nazi occupation affected Amsterdam, the realities of life in a concentration camp and how those incarcerated often kept their humanity by small acts of kindness.

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Make Beliefs Comix.com Offers Printables That Are Fun and Help With Literacy

MakeBeliefsComix.com is a site created by author Bill Zimmerman that helps to engage reading learners in fun activities that lead to literacy. The site allows anyone to create their own comic strips. There are also resources for teachers and parents. Find out more about what this site has to offer from its author:

“As an author of interactive books to help young people find their writers’ voices, I often am asked by educators and parents for help in reaching reluctant writers. With this goal in mind, I have added more than 100 free PRINTABLES on my online comic strip site, MakeBeliefsComix.com. Now  you can print out, at no cost, interactive pages from my comic books to use for writing, reading, drawing and telling stories.

This enhanced MakeBeliefs PRINTABLES feature is the latest addition to the four year-old online educational comics site where educators and students from 180 countries come to build their own comic strips and practice language, writing and reading skills. The new printable pages are taken from my popular Make Beliefs books  and drawn by cartoonist Tom Bloom, who illustrated the best-selling Children’s Letters to God.

Now, a teacher or parent using the web site will be able to distribute graphic handouts to students in English-as-a-Second Language or literacy programs that ask for written or drawn responses to such imaginative questions as:

  • Make believe you possessed a magic flying carpet.  Where would your travels take you?
  • Make believe you had a net to catch a favorite moment in your life.  Which would it be?
  • Imagine you could talk to  your favorite book character.  Who would that be? What would you say?
  • Make believe that with the snap of your fingers you could change yourself.  How or what would you become?
  • Make believe you could create your own set of holidays. What would they celebrate?

For copies of these printables and more go to http://www.makebeliefscomix.com/Printables. The feature also offers comix templates using characters from the web site along with blank talk and thought balloons that students can fill with text to create their own comic strips.

Google and UNESCO selected MakeBeliefsComix.com as one of the world’s most innovative web sites fostering literacy and reading — http://www.google.com/literacy/projects.html

Users of MakeBeliefsComix.com make comics strips by selecting from 20 fun characters with different moods — happy, sad, angry, worried — and write words for blank talk and thought balloons to make characters talk and think. This site is used by educators to teach language, reading and writing skills, and also for students in ESL programs to facilitate self-expression and storytelling, as well as computer literacy. Some educational therapists use the online comics with deaf and autistic people to help them understand concepts and communicate. Parents and children can create stories together, print them to create comic books or email them to friends.

Please share MakeBeliefsComix.com with your colleagues, students, friends or readers of your publications and favorite listserv groups. We need your help — it takes a community to build and nature a rich educational resource.

Sincerely,

Bill Zimmerman
Creator, MakeBeliefsComix, and author, Your Life in Comics’’

Book Review: Gaia Girls, Enter the Earth by Lee Welles

Gaia Girls Enter the Earth imageElizabeth is excited that fourth grade is almost over and she’ll soon be able to hang out for lazy days on her farm with her best friend Rachel. She knows there will also be lots of work to do, but she loves her family’s land and the way her parents care for it. She’s always felt a close connection to the things that grow there.

But Elizabeth’s idyllic summer is not to be, as she discovers Rachel is moving away and a large corporation that runs giant pig farms is buying up nearby land to turn into a factory farm. Her parents refuse to sell, but will they be able to stand living next to the new operation, which will change their own quality of life in many ways?

Even though Elizabeth’s parents fight against the plan, it seems as though they are doomed to lose. But then Elizabeth meets an otter who can talk, and otter who calls herself Gaia. Gaia says she is the living Earth, and she says Elizabeth herself can do something to help save the land she dearly loves.

Gaia Girls, Enter the Earth by Lee Welles, illustrated by Ann Hameister, is the first in a series that focuses on children using special powers to help save what they love. It shows that saving our environment can be very personal, not just a term that’s thrown about. It’s personal when we can equate a small piece of land that we love, and the reasons we love it, as something worth saving. Gaia Girls, Enter the Earth should be good for mother-daughter book clubs with girls aged 9 to 12 who have in interest in learning more about the environment.

Book Review: The Pony Whisperer: Team Challenge by Janet Rising

Team Challenge imageIn The Pony Whisperer: The Word on the Yard by Janet Rising, Pia found an ancient figurine that helped her communicate with horses. Her new talent gained her both friends and enemies, as some people used Pia’s new ability to help their ponies and some just believe she’s lying.

In the second book of the series, Team Challenge, Pia and her friends are discovering that being part of a team is a lot of work. It also means if you want to be successful, you have to focus on what works for your teammates, not just what you feel is best for you. In this case, the teammates include everyone’s horses.

Team Challenge is interesting to read both for the things Pia and her friends learn about working together for a common purpose, and also for the insights it gives into preparing for a team competition. It also delves into the question of ethics, as Pia wrestles with whether or not her ability to talk to horses, and possibly get their cooperation in the competition, counts as cheating.

Great Christmas Book for Family Reading with Older Kids

A Christmas Memory imageSaturday night my husband and youngest daughter set off for a basketball game, leaving my oldest daughter and me alone together for the evening. We intended to take advantage of the time to watch a movie only the two of us would like, but instead I remembered a little book of three short stories I got for Christmas a couple of years ago. The book is by Truman Capote, who I haven’t read much of, but I remember thinking when I first read it how touching the  stories were.

So I asked my daughter Madeleine if we could read before we picked out a movie, intending only to read the first story, my favorite. She like it as much as I did, and we ended up spending our evening reading the other two stories and talking about them.

The collection of short stories is called, A Christmas Memory, One Christmas, and The Thanksgiving Visitor. In A Christmas Memory, Capote recalls making fruitcake with an elderly cousin who had never matured past the mentality of a child. She was his friend when he was a child, and the memory he describes, as well as his descriptions of a simple life and times, are heartwarming. In One Christmas, Capote talks about visiting his father in New Orleans for Christmas one year. He didn’t really know his father, and the experience of being with a stranger in a big city was both overwhelming and exciting for him. Finally, in The Thanksgiving Visitor, Capote describes how his cousin and friend insisted he invite the boy who had been bullying him at school to Thanksgiving dinner one year, and what happened when the boy came for the day.

Each of these little stories vividly evokes the times they were set in. They are also intimate portraits of the people involved. I highly recommend this small volume as a read-out-loud book at Christmas for families with children aged 10 and up.

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